Hi Winter, I wonder what you r mum was listening to? what else were you able to see from the top for the rainbow could you tell us more? thank you for you learning online Winter.
Your story is great Winter! I like how you used commas when you listed all of the colours of the rainbow. I like that in your story, you tried to call out to your mum from the top of the rainbow. What did it feel like when you slid all the way back down?
Hi Winter, I wonder what you r mum was listening to? what else were you able to see from the top for the rainbow could you tell us more? thank you for you learning online Winter.
ReplyDeleteYour story is great Winter! I like how you used commas when you listed all of the colours of the rainbow. I like that in your story, you tried to call out to your mum from the top of the rainbow. What did it feel like when you slid all the way back down?
ReplyDeleteI almost crashed into some birds on the way down
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